Board Thread:Critique and Advice/@comment-3053446-20170618005554/@comment-3053446-20170618042338

That's a good Point,  I will definitely look into that and try and find a middle ground, but from the lore, I think shapeshifters are not very well known. But I could definitely do more with it. as time goes on. I would still keep the picture though.

The Brotherhood is a placeholder name for the Space Marine Chapters that guard the Widow Prime Sector against threats, It was originally in the area of the Ghoul Stars, but I only found out recently that was never controlled by the Imperium. So I moved the Widow Prime Sector into Segementum Obscurus away from the ghoul stars entirely after I learned about the Pale Wasting's incident.

And I agree I think they shouldn't be pushovers. With overpowered, I can agree with, and how they were dealt with was more of me trying to figure out how the hell could they deal with them. I know for one place I chose the ghoul stars because they are so underdeveloped of a region. At the end of it. They only killed the central leadership, I might leave it more ambiguous that they were destroyed.

And no worries I think criticism is part of writing.

I had to look into some meanings of names and I found Janus means two face so I am calling them Janarians. (I know there is a single astartes called Janus from the Thousand Sons).