Talk:Battle for Hive Helsreach- Day 44

I must say that this story is rather good. There are no grammatical or spelling errors and it reads well. The only part that could do with being changed is the sentence in which you have Vynos' name repeated (replacing the second one with a pronoun would be more grammatically correct). Anyway, great story Bluebeard, looking forwards to seeing how it ends. A Shadow Before the Dawn My Talk 02:00, August 20, 2011 (UTC)