Talk:Martyred Angels

Okay, I like that you have all sorts of stuff here that usually seems to be neglected in chapters. However, claiming something is "Anglo-Saxon" or "Mega City One slash Moria" is just really, really lazy writing and you could really spend time with describing those places to readers instead of throwing something you have seen and think everyone else has too. I mean, what if your reader is not aware of Judge Dredd? He isn't that big of a deal to be honest.

If I were you, I would seriously spend some extra time still proofreading this thing. -- Remos talk 06:15, February 14, 2018 (UTC)