User talk:Khalael

My editing
I'm sorry for the frequent edits. I only do it because my friend keeps adding stuff (completely un-edtitted or spell checked) to his articles (which are entirely based on fluff I wrote for him) and my articles. I'll try to get him to e-mail or PM me any edits he wishes to make so that I can review it for him. Currently I am using Appleworks 6 for writing out large edits. (such as my current project Battle for Maroc VII).

Cal XD 19:28, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

First of all: The idea is not mine it is imposter101's, I write alot of the fluff for him (as part of a favour) but names, numbers and ranks are normaly his idea, with the exception of Arrius the First/ Arrius the Fifth. You will need to tell him that, I am in most respects his Editor and creative writer.

Secondly: It is not a Legion, it does not claim to be a lost legion and Syrath is a horrific greater daemon (formely of Tzeentch) who was spawned many millenia before the Primarchs where ever created. I am still writing a lot of fluff on how he gained such a following, it's mainly due to Imposter101's idea that Syrath gets gullible people to sign insedious contracts that bind them to his service. I have, however, reduced the number of astaetes followers Syrath commands because 10,000 renegades (not traitor legions) gathered over 10,000 years would still be an awful lot IMHO.

Thirdly: Imposter101 likes to put warriors into groups (and give them rankings) he made this quite vocal to me when I made eits that he did not approve of. If you read the article it states that in a War Legion (10000) the Renegade Guard outnumber the Astartes at least 10:1. That and Imposter 101 sayrs that many War Legions are entirely made up of Renegade Guard.

Cal XD 23:13, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

@SniperGhost: That was imposter101 again. I've deleted them and replaced them with Chaos Space Marine Painter ones that I spent some time on. I personaly only use V5 for loyalist marines because of the better colours and the weapon options (like I have for my Prophets of Destiny page). Thanks for pointing that out though, I had kind of guessed that imposter101 had tried and failed to use V5 so used V9 instead. Cal XD 16:06, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re: 'How to make a fanon Tyranid Hive Fleet'
The 'how-to' category is in no way my private ground; if you want to make a how-to article, please do! Jochannon 18:52, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Cal. I was wondering what categories I should put The Purgatory Program in. Any ideas? Supahbadmarine 21:49, November 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks and sure. Though it is important to note that the Purgatory Program is Radical so they would probably be opposed to it. Supahbadmarine 22:15, November 21, 2010 (UTC)

Either way it is fine with me. i leave the details of theri involvment up to you. Supahbadmarine 21:42, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

So, have you decided how you want the Prophetic Forgiven involved in The Purgatory Program? If you have let me know and I will make the changes. Supahbadmarine 01:52, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Excellent! I will write them in. Supahbadmarine 04:23, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The basic description is in the Biology section. However the interlocking polates are the same, but think darker colored. Also Derkallen have the same basic body structure as humans, so two arms two legs. Supahbadmarine 19:44, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Start with a basic warrior. I am still trying to figure out the aesthetic of some of the other SubBreeds. Supahbadmarine 19:54, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

Important note about the Derkallen. They have a proper head mounted on a neck. Also The horns are smaller on an average warrior, and run in an axial plane. Supahbadmarine 05:12, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Cal. I just want to point out that I have added Syrath's involvement with the Vralgazi. Imposter has okayed it but I want your opinion as well. Also check out The Redeemed. It is a possible super Chapter with some NCF material. Supahbadmarine 19:10, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for giving me your opinion. Also I was not referencing the Forgiven. I was Speaking of a Chapter that had members that served Chaos but were then cleansed. Supahbadmarine 19:38, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. looking back I suppose I should have notified you, and for that I apologise. Anyway, you and Imposter have free reign to edit the Sycyorthi section, so feel free to get creative. Supahbadmarine 18:41, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Cal. I just wanted to let you know that I was the one to suggest that Primarch request a rivalry with Syraths Warriors. I thought he would contact you and Imposter first. Please be understanding. Primarch has had a difficult time adjusting to the way we do things. Supahbadmarine 01:09, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you. Primarch11 01:24, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

My article still has the NFC on it can I get rid of it? Primarch11 01:30, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

I need your help. I want the Space Primates numbers to have 2000 marines but I need a reason. I told Superbadmarine it and it was that the Space Primate's homeworld and recruiting worlds are in a sector which many Tyranid Hive fleets come from. That being the case the Imperium have allowed the Space Primates to increase their ranks. How does that sound to you. Primarch11 18:07, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Cal. Have you gotten back to Primarch11 about the question he asked you? Supahbadmarine 21:38, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Just to let you know I like to thank you and superbadmarine for helping me in this situation. Primarch11 21:55, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I did have one idea, but I am not sure how it would work out. I was thinking that they could be a lost successor of the Space Wolves and as such organize themselves in a similar fashion. Though them being stationed in a dangerous sector was a very good Idea. Supahbadmarine 22:16, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

I concur. Supahbadmarine 22:34, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I have two things. 1. thank you both for helping. And 2, how about we put my idea of the tyranids along with the idea of xenos on other worlds because after the Tyranid attacks, the other aliens might decide to rise up. Both causes would allow the chapter to be able to recruit more. Let me know. Also Ive sent this to superbadmarine. Primarch11 23:38, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The 1st idea makes sense but the imperium might just send imperial guardsmen to deal with them. The 2nd idea (and no offense to Superbadmarine) might be difficult to explain. So I think the 3rd idea makes more sense. Ill let you make the changes if you like. Space Primates its the Sector and Reason for Increase of Numbers part. Primarch11 23:46, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

never mind I already did it. Primarch11 02:01, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

you wouldn't have any idea if Dark Seer is planning to take my Space Primate articles of the NFC list do you? Because I put down for numbers 1600-200 just a few hours ago. Primarch11 21:32, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Adeptus Curates Model
If you made one, that would be so awesome it would be- incredibly awesome!

the Prophets of Destiny can be an enemy of the Shadow of the Gamma Dragon. As for the Prophetic Forgiven, you have to remember their link to the Alpha legion is a secret so the Prophetic Forgiven wouldn't know about that. If you mean like rivals then yea thats fine. Primarch11 20:50, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well i guess you can make them an enemy. just let me know when your done so i can see if there's anything i want to change, ok? Primarch11 21:22, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, can't wait to see it! Jochannon 22:09, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Cal, might you give me some critique on my Namagh article? I would be grateful if you did TardirProductions 17:14, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Cal. It just occured to me, does Cyrse have an Autarch? Supahbadmarine 18:43, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well i look forward to when you do have one. After all, I now have a Craftworld and there is another one around the bend. Supahbadmarine 19:13, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Haven't heard from you in awhile. I like your new Craftworlds. Primarch11 22:27, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

I have i think its good, have you read the new chapters ive made? Primarch11 00:05, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome. TardirProductions 17:46, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Cal. Would it be alright if my character Ezekiel Cornatus had a run in with Syrath at some point. I am not quite ready for it to happen yet but I wanted to check ahead of time. Supahbadmarine 19:56, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

I am glad to hear you are on board with the idea. I tell you when I am ready to incorperate Syrath. I will also consider your Librarian. You are absolutely correct that he would put Zeke on edge. Supahbadmarine 20:35, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

whys that? Primarch11 20:50, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

ah i get it. So that would make the Infinite Angels and Prophetic Forgiven allies? If so then their the only allies they have within the Brotherhood of the Faithful. Also i replied on what you said in the infinite angels talk page. Primarch11 21:11, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

okay sure, just tell me what i have to do. Primarch11 17:17, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

i just made the sensei who I thinks reveals the Star Child to the Revenant Tigers. Grim Doris Primarch11 18:33, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

thanks i read the comment. I like the name you propose, but i decided to call them the Wandering Shadows. i left a comment on the talk page describing why. Primarch11 18:57, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

If you meant for the marines then thats okay, i like it. Also did you edit something on the page. Im not mad just curious. Primarch11 19:05, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

what year should I put down when Grim meets the Revenant Tigers? Primarch11 19:36, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

okay, is there any color style you prefer and who should be leading them and what should their current numbers be? Primarch11 20:22, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay when i start it i'll need you to do the background since you're the one who started the page so it can help me add on. Also i was thinking of that it would not be marines from the Revenant Tigers, but other non-chaos renegade marines who join their ranks too, kind of like the Red Corsairs. Also, whats a Epistolary? Primarch11 20:34, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

i've just finished and i found a good symbol for them too. ill give you the link to the page when i make it. Primarch11 20:50, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

here it is Shadow Claws Primarch11 21:21, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

hey, so i was thinking that the Shadow Claws could have gotten some sort of mutation that allows them to slip through shadows. Also i thought of some notable members for them, from both the Revenant Tigers and other rouge marines. Primarch11 20:55, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Well for members (also you can do their names if you like) would be both from the tigers and other renegade marines they pick up.

The first two would be the captain and the librarian. The others:

A chaplain from the tigers (He was low rank so wans't targeted)

An apothecary from perhaps the Ultramarines.

A damaged imperial Fists dreadnought they found.

A terminator marine who was exiled from the Salamanders.

A scout from the tigers.

a Sergeant from the tigers but lost his right arm.

A tactical marine from the tigers but was part of Deathwatch during the time, but fled after he heard what became of his chapter.

A techmarine from my chapter, The Emperor's Iron.

An assault marine from one of your chapters.

And one of the Fallen Dark Angels.

A marine from the Legion of the Damned

A marine from the space wolves

A devastator marine with a Plasma cannon.

Tell me what you think. Primarch11 01:58, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

ok ill start working as soon as i can. I have to help my mom prepare for a party so want be on for a little bitPrimarch11 19:46, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

im sure supah and tadiri will contribute too. ill ask them Primarch11 19:51, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

okay ill tell them to add to comment on the talk page. meanwhile should i do the character that we do want to put on now or later? Primarch11 20:49, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

also what about a marine from the Red Scorpions chapter. because i found think it would be like that he began to show signs of mutation and since the chapter only likes pure humans, exiled him, how about that? Primarch11 20:52, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

im going to start putting down the notable members right now if you're okay with that. Primarch11 20:55, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

hey so i added the members for the Shadow Claws. I had made reasons for why those who were from another chapter joined, but my internet shut down before i could save so ill do that later or you can if you want. Primarch11 03:21, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

if you mean space marine Bob for humor then that would be okay. Primarch11 21:47, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

k also tell me if this good. Now since Grim was undercover in the Inquisition, when he joined, he had a teacher. That inquisitor later on assembled a team of Grey Knights to hunt down the Sensei and Illuminati. Grim let him do this so he could find other things that may have been built by his brothers. A few years pass and when The inquisitor and his team, along with other inquisitors and a force of Prophetic Forgiven to a Death World called Gail, where a Sensei had a station built. But they were attacked by Chaos marines and Grim had secretly arrived with the Shadow Claws to help him recover anything useful from there as well as allow the Shadow Claws have vengeance on the Prophetic Forgiven. let me know and ill get to work on it. Primarch11 22:00, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

if you can think of any battles that the Shadow Claws take part in, let me know.Primarch11 01:30, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

thanks, also, i asked Supha this but he hasn't respond, do you think i should add dates to each event for Grim Doris so no one gets confused? Primarch11 23:19, March 5, 2011 (UTC)

check out the battle i put on the Shadow Claws page. Primarch11 17:55, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

I just thought of an idea, what if the Prophetic Forgiven created a special group of marines to hunt down the Shadow Claws. Primarch11 22:31, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

thats true, maybe they could form a group to hunt down anything to do with the Star Child. Primarch11 22:40, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

i read your comment on the Infinite Angels. I suppose we could do that and they could be the Eye of Truth, since its a medallion that allows psykers to see if someone is lying. Also the Thousand Blade since it powerful psychic attacks it unleashes. But the Prophetic Forgiven would have to give them the relics when they needed it. Primarch11 00:33, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

sure you think of the relic and the Infinite Angels will give the Eye of Truth for it to show a sign of their blood oath. Primarch11 00:55, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

i like the idea. If you can think of what i can do let me know. If not then ill think of one. As for the Thousand blade thing, i think option 1 sounds better because i doubt the Infinite Angels would have given it if it wasn't important. Primarch11 01:14, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

okay i will, but my family is having dinner so ill do it after. Primarch11 01:33, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

you should probably add the relationship between the two chapters on the Prophetic Forgiven page. Primarch11 22:13, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

i saw your comment. thanks for telling me. also don't forget to put down the Infinite Angels as an ally on the Prophetic Forgiven page. Primarch11 23:27, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

yes i saw. nice Primarch11 23:58, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

hey i found a picture of a Khorn Daemon Prince you could probably use for Lord Coraks page Primarch11 01:39, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

ok i put it up. Primarch11 19:44, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please remove the Coraks image, sorry not loged on since Im at school.

I've created a new image for the Coraks page. Imposter101 20:54, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Im loving the new Coraks fluff, it's great you've taken intrest in the Coraks page and added fluff to it. The New Coraks page could represent Coraks at a diffrent stage of Daemon hood before becoming the Be'kalor style. I'l add it once the Daemonic accension sections has been completed. The Coraks model however needs some love and proper assembling as his wings will need to be pinned and the rest of his armour green stuffed. Im currently playing Dawn of War Retribution and working on fluff for Kremlin. What do you think of him? Imposter101 21:27, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

ok ok i will Primarch11 22:33, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Check out Shadow Claws Primarch11 00:26, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

i've started adding the Prophetic Forgiven to the enemy section on some of my chapters of the Brotherhood. If you see anything you want to change on them, feel free just let me know when you're done. Primarch11 20:39, March 11, 2011 (UTC)

hey i found a picture of a Lord of Change that could be syrath if you and Imposter are okay with that Primarch11 01:02, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

okay i put it up. Primarch11 02:05, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

i just got an awesome idea. What if Grim and Syrath meet each other and have a conflict. Primarch11 20:41, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

great so ill work on the story on the Grim Doris page and when im done you can copy it. Primarch11 20:52, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

quick question: what time period should they meet, I was thinking either M35 or M37. Primarch11 20:55, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

okay Primarch11 21:05, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

do you have a page that talks about the Purgation Crusade or something that describes it? Primarch11 21:17, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

okay did it scroll down and you'll find it. Primarch11 22:21, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

sure, i was also thinking of doing one when Grim runs into the Craftworld that works with Syrath. Primarch11 23:24, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

ill ask him when i get the chance. don't forget to put down Syrath's and Grim's encounter on Syrath page.Primarch11 00:02, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

hey what if Syrath teamed up with the Black Legion Chaos Lord im planning on making to destroy both the Brotherhood and Grim. Primarch11 17:18, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

ill message him. I was also planning that he have some marines from other traitor legions and he would be allies with a Dark Apostle too. just to let you know. Primarch11 20:54, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

well i sent him a message, I think since i have free time ill work on the chaos lord. Primarch11 21:01, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I've created a very basic earliey prototype of Syarth using Photoshop. This will be changed very soon.



hey so i asked Imposter this and he said to ask you as well. i was thinking that Bevid and Syrath could be allies and this is how it would star. you see im working on two pages one called the Traveler and the other called the Stones of the Gods. The stones are ancient and powerful objects which for some reason neither daemons nor those corrupted by chaos can use. Daemons are automatically destroyed and chaos corrupted people die slowly. Bevid has one or two of them but makes his minions use them instead. One of them steals a book about Tzeentch from the Black Library. So we can keep the part about the 3rd War legion saving him but Bevid and Syrath make a deal: Syrath's gives bevid more forces to hunt down the stones and the others after them. then in return Bevid will give the book to him to destroy the other Chaos Gods so he may rule all of Chaos and make Bevid the new Warmaster of Chaos. What do you think? Primarch11 12:04, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

hey cal did you see the last message i sent you? Primarch11 20:57, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, thanks for the review. Sure, I'll find a way to forge an alliance between the Knights and the Prophetic Forgiven. It might take a while though, since whenever I write something I go OCD and try to make everything perfect. Victory is Forever! 23:29, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

I've thought of five different ways the Knights of Infinity could ally themselves with the Prophetic Forgiven, but honestly, none of them seem plausible. The two chapters just seem like they should hate each other. The Knights completely disregard the Codex Astartes in favor of their own organization and tactics, and the Prophetic Forgiven follow it down to the last point. Unless you can think of a way to make it work, I'm stumped. Victory is Forever! 03:33, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

so could Bevid and Syrath be allies? imposter told me i should ask you. and he's okay with it. Primarch11 10:24, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

great so i have an idea of how they meet and do an alliance but if you have one let me know. Primarch11 23:32, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

i did but i haven't heard back from him. my summary is at the bottom of his talk page. Primarch11 23:58, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Well here's my idea of how Bevid and Syrath meet. you see im working on two pages one called the Traveler and the other called the Stones of the Gods. The stones are ancient and powerful objects which for some reason neither daemons nor those corrupted by chaos can use. Daemons are automatically destroyed and chaos corrupted people die slowly. Bevid has one or two of them but makes his minions use them instead. One of them steals a book about Tzeentch from the Black Library. So later on maybe the 3rd War legion saves him and his warband but then Bevid and Syrath make a deal: Syrath's gives bevid more forces to hunt down the stones and the others after them. then in return Bevid will give the book to him to destroy the other Chaos Gods so he may rule all of Chaos and make Bevid the new Warmaster of Chaos Primarch11 15:52, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely. Frankly I am surprized that neither of you have asked about this before now. Have you already run the idea by Primarch? Supahbadmarine 00:48, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

i like the idea too (i read wat you sent to Supha) we should make a blog post or something so we can plan this out a little more orderly then just sending messages to user talks. or we could do it on one of the three character talk pages. im copying this to Supha. Primarch11 01:10, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Me too. I like the Astartes and all, but you can only be so orignal with them. They just seem to have boundaries in what they can do, and still be proper Marines, you know? Supahbadmarine 01:12, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

i like it. who would the Inquisitor be? because Grim joined the Inquisition sometime in the M41 so he could destroy them. Primarch11 01:12, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Cal. I already have an idea of how it should all go down. Like Primarch I believe we should discuss it on a single page. Either a blog, or Grim Doris's Talk page, because he has less chatter than Zeke or syrath. Tell me what you think. Supahbadmarine 01:32, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

what did you change on the traveler

i read it thanks Primarch11 18:40, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

pretty good, u don't mind if i make a few changes. There not big ones. Primarch11 18:43, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

i just want to remind you that the Shadow Claws, who are a part of Grim's group, hate the Prophetic Forgiven so we should think about putting the Prophetic Forgiven captain. im not saying we should take him out but we should think of a way of putting him and the Shadow Claws, or at least their leader in the story. Primarch11 02:26, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

oh yea, thats a good idea, making him a sleeper agent. also i talked to Supha and we agreed that ill make the story draft and you guys can edit it. also i just begun the page for the Shadow One Primarch11 02:41, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

i was thinking that the story would take place in 918.M41, i asked supha but he hasn't responded yet. Primarch11 22:08, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

okay we'll won't do a date, ill let supha know. Primarch11 01:10, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Crossing Paths [[User:Primarch11|Primarch11 04:15, April 9, 2011 (UTC)]]

Crossing Paths Primarch11 04:15, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

you know maybe you should do a page for Otda. Primarch11 00:31, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, Cal, i will make a template thingy-thing on the Korpiklaani article saying that you are an author too, since you have contributed to it a lot. TardirProductions 14:06, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Have you managed to take a loook at The Adventures of Ulgrugamazekz yet? Supahbadmarine 21:31, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

hey this is just a suggestion but maybe you could do apage of the Otda guy,the travelers other student.

hey, so i was thinking and this is a just a suggestion but maybe if you should do a page about Otda, the Slann student of the Traveler [[User:Primarch11|Primarch11 22:55, April 20, 2011 (UTC)]]

Hey Cal. I was wondering if you and Imposter have figured out the Forces from Syrath's Warriors that are involved in Crossing Paths. I ask because I believe I have a good idea of how the battle that introduces Drasus and Zeke should go. Let me know when you get the chance. Supahbadmarine 06:29, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Also, i am planning a pair of proper Chaos Gods. Wish me luck. Supahbadmarine 15:05, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

I see. So what force are they going to encounter first, before Syrath knows about the stone? Supahbadmarine 20:32, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

sup how ya been? sorry i haven't been on for awhile. its nice to see that the Crossing Path story is going well. Primarch11 22:21, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

im thinking it should be Grim's too, but disguised as a Inquisitor. ill try to do it soon. ill let supha know Primarch11 22:44, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. I would be happy to have them. They could be special weapons for anti-vehicle warfare. Supahbadmarine 23:46, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Trust me I do. The Derkallen will be able to make good use of these. Supahbadmarine 15:37, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely. Arlocrom is the kind of guy that would look for any advantage in battle. Creating a new, powerful weapon to crush his enemy's spirit is just the kind of thing he would do. You know I am kind of surprized that you have never tried to make your own Xenos. Supahbadmarine 15:44, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I fully intend to keep working on it, but as far as I can see the ball is in either your, or Primarch11's court. I have been planning ahead in preparation. Supahbadmarine 15:56, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds like a plan. I have to tell you that i might not be able to get to it today, because I have work and i like to have enough time to finish a particular post. Supahbadmarine 16:10, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, go ahead. Supahbadmarine 02:44, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Very good. I will have some things to add of course, but overall it is weel written. Thanks for the help. Supahbadmarine 16:28, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ihave been thinking of a new faction recently, and would like your opinion. The faction is a small empire that are semi-Abhuman and semi-Xeno. The basic idea is that beack during the Age of Strife a human civilization landed on a planet controlled by a powerful race of Xenos, who then enslaved them. However, it was slowly found out that by some cosmic joke the two species were sexually compatible. Over the millenia the to species slowly melded to form a new species. What do you think. Supahbadmarine 03:29, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Did you get my last message? Supahbadmarine 21:41, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Cal XD, if you ever get the chance, could you look over the Solaris Federation and Sankari pages, and tell me if there is anything that needs to be fixed? Vivaporius 19:46, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

That would be cool, Sonic Weaponry would be heavily used by the 6th War-Legions infantry brigades, lances and battle groups. Its been a while since I last posted and I'll be making some updates to the origonal pages and working on the newer ones at a later time. Imposter101 15:13, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Cool, I'm happy for Syrath's Warriors to use them in combat. Spec-Operation units would use them in most situations while 1st War Legion Field Marshals and Commondants would also use them in large scale battles. Imposter101 17:52, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Curates model
WOW. That model is awesome!Jochannon 15:34, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oooh, can't wait! Jochannon 16:09, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

It's realy good, I'd like to add some of my drawings to the page but I lack a scanner. But still its awsome to see drawings not taken off devient art. I don't like using pictures which are drawn by great artists. Isn't that the Tech Marine you showed me at the Games Workshop a while ago? Imposter101 13:23, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wait are you going? I havn't been in GW for about a Month and have had little reason to go. I would go if you're going to. Imposter101 13:32, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thats fine with me. Imposter101 13:50, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wait its Lord of Change! From Dakka Dakka, really , I mean really! Well that was Unexpected. Imposter101 20:41, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely. Supahbadmarine 04:14, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, i'll make sure to drop by if i need any help.No peace in the galaxy, only war.-Kirbycollin1 20:06, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Adeptus Curates
I canno remember if I answered this before, but you left a message on the Curates talk page suggesting they could be allied with the Prophetic Forgiven; I think that's fine. Jochannon 16:05, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, you got steam at all? It will be much easier to communicate over that. No peace in the galaxy, only war.-Kirbycollin1 20:20, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Steam
Ok, just waiting for bladiumdragon to reply with his steam account name, you got any particular ideas for it? No peace in the galaxy, only war.-Kirbycollin1 23:47, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Quick Response
Any user is allowed to place a non-canon friendly template on any article, provided they have a community agreeing with the decision. If the community disagrees or disputes, the template is not allowed to be placed.

Any calming influences you could provide to an overly aggravated situation would be greatly appreciated in the absence of admins, thank you. Blade Bane 10:01, June 16, 2011 (UTC)Blade bane

Deceit on Tegotia
can you get on the IRC at your closest convenience? It's time to start brainstorming No peace in the galaxy, only war.-Kirbycollin1 20:22, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

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i would like to thank you for both the assurances of this articles safety and continued existance. the complaints regarding grammer cannot currently be fixed due to a faulty keyboard (that seems to choose when to spell and what at it'sown pleasing). i can however confirm that regarding age, several of the originals will die except those characters that remain pivotal to the story, such as the future chapter masters. various methods, such as reincarnation, revitalisation as a living saint, spirit outlasting the body, cybernetics etc. failing the methods specified, unaugmented canon characters such as Commander Dante seem to live long enough to be considered unitered dreadnoughts. thus certian characters such as Lupus of the luna wolves and Goliath of the deat hguard shall remain alive and long-lived.

thanks again for the conformations {thegreatbeing}

Rendos, the world eater, had his cybernetic implants altered and increased to preserve his pysichal capability. Shan had himself cloned a great many times after the heresy. each is as original as the next, and when one dies another takes his place. theoretically shan has 'died' over 24 times since he began usign this method of preservation. Lupus wears an ancient set of power armour that acts like a dreadnought, preserving his life. Goliath has regular biological treatment to keep him alive, Lazerous was brought back to life as an immortal saint, Alexi learned the secret of rebirth from Sobek, and can now regenerate himself when dying or at the end of his long lifes pan (say every 1000 years). Sobek himself has little of his body remaining, being more like a walking skeleton animated by it's own spirit. Stein has so many cybernetics that he no longer has to worry about dying of natural causes, and Grimm, true to his name, uses rather....dark methods to preserve gimself, like sucking the life-force out of other living creatures.

bear in mind i've just revealed HUGE spoilers

spelling as i said will eventually be fixed along with the keyboard

Half Bloods Change
Now do you think the Half Bloods page is more canon friendly please refer to my talk page if you think anything can be changed again

LunarKing 02:56, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

hey im back and since its summer im hopping to do more articles. Im also working on the Crossing Paths story too. Primarch11 00:32, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Have you had any difficulty accessing the site recently by any chance? Supahbadmarine 00:40, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

thanks for the tip. I read it but don't have an exact idea what they decided on. Primarch11 01:22, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

i like it, Im currently doing one where Grim is discussing with the other Inquisitor about the stones and such. By the way is Inquisitor Alica a psyker? Primarch11 01:32, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

nice job with the last part to chapter 4. I was thinking that maybe instead of Grim coming down, it could be some of his men come to help the Eldar capture Zeke. Let me know what you think. Primarch11 23:12, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Cool. Now i know of 3 persons on this wikia with at least some Norwegian blood in their veins. Me, You and Totalimmortal. Though i am not sure how many Scottish persons are here. But it's cool, no matter how many(Well, not if it is too many, though) Regards, TardirProductions 09:56, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

I know. I will try to get it done, but I am rather busy today and I don't know if I will be able to finish it today. The last couple of days has been stressful due to a disaster at my house.T_T Supahbadmarine 13:20, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

It is not nearly as bad as the word disaster makes it sound. The plumming in my laundry room got clogged, so now I have two large sinks filled with rancid water, and an unusable laundry machine. It is more of a hassle than a disaster really. Supahbadmarine 14:24, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

hey cal just thought I correct you about when Syrath said he sensed something in the Warp in Crossing Paths, you forget that Sensei can't be sensed by Daemons in the warp. Primarch11 22:31, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

okay i was thinking that the thing that attack Syrath could be Grim's Black Templar if thats good with you. Primarch11 23:08, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

okay ill let Supha know. Primarch11 17:12, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the update. i will make sure to incorperate that. Supahbadmarine 23:11, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The Veilleux
Hey Cal, would you mind checking out my House Veilleux article if you should ever get the chance, and tell me how much needs to be change or deleted? Be gentle. Vivaporius 19:52, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Cal_XD, I would be happy to the Rixari as an enemy/ally. Vivaporius 18:34, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

hey i don't know how much ill be able to do with the Crossing Path, my mom and I are taking a vacation in California. Primarch11 21:17, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for your advice, I'll make the changes accordingly.

About the chapter numbers, the Brotherhood is not a single chapter (I going to be using you advice in this one). The Lord's Chevaliers were headed out to the Celeste Sector in 051.M33, when beset upon by a warp storm. The chapter master Célestin Veilleux (one of the family members that joined the Space Marine during the Great Crusade), ordered the chapter to slip up the fleet, to make getting through the gaps safer. Each part of the fleet was to arrive at specific areas of the Celeste Sector, so that they could regroup quickly. However, the warp storm slowed down time in some parts of the region, and sped it up in others. Thus, some ships arrived weeks of months ahead of the other group, and led to them believing they were the only survivors of the fleet. Each group rebranded themselves, and swore their alligence to a patron family, who would provide everything for them, since they really couldn't do so it the current state.

About around M40, the five chapters, each with their own creeds, ideals, and tactics, remembered that they all came from the same chapter meant to protect their sector. One of the chapter masters organized a meeting between the others that would led to the creation of the Celeste Brotherhood, a symbolic alliance that was suppose to allow the chapters to act a single force, though not a true chapter, to avoid conflicting with the Codex. It was suppose to be a way for the chapters to act as if they were still the defunct Lord's Chevaliers, without drawing the attention of the Inquisition. The Brotherhood numbers 5100 members, but their not actually a part of the Brotherhood, but still members of their respective chapter.

Oh yeah, I read about the Space Primates yesterday morning. I didn't know that it was NCF at first. Personally, I thought everyone could make a 2000-strong chapter until that. Vivaporius 13:37, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. Remember, he's 40,000 years old, emmensely powerful psychic and materially, and rather manipulative person, though not outright evil. Vivaporius 21:29, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Uh, Cal_XD, I checked out the quote you made, and as nice as it is, I got my reasons for being a bit taken aback. Here's why, and please don't get mad at me. Please?

1. Kaizari Mtawala is female. Check out the the list of Kaizaris I'm working on when you get the chance.

2. More powerful than the Awali? Perhaps as powerful, maybe. They are as you mentioned, 30 feet tall and all. Awali crossbred with Eldar DNA to give them some of the psychic control, and their nanites give them god-like powers (walking through walls, breathing space). I'd suggest you look at the Awali page too. Just a suggestion. :)

3. The Awali may be the face of the Xai'athi, but they are just one of the breeds. There nine out there. Be kind and let them have their five minutes of fame.

In any case, I also want to discuss the history between the Xai'athi and the Rixari when you get the chance. Where is the Rixari Collective located? Vivaporius 02:39, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

So basically, the Rixari are walking whales? So were are they psycially? What is the average grade of a Rixari pysker? Vivaporius 15:34, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I've just looked at the quote, and I approve. Of course, my opinion dosen't matter on your article. ;) Vivaporius 15:36, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

The Rixari Incursion
I like the story you've got, but though I haven't gotten around to working on the other breeds, the worlds that fell would have to be very few. Only the Awali have the weakness to sound, that's why the others exist to make up for that, though they have weaknesses of their own. The Vashti are incapable of feeling pain, but only slightly stronger than a human.The Iconians (Awali with a robotic body), are nearly industructible, but EMPs, very powerful EMPs mind you, can shut them down. Nexusians are the sucessful crossbreeds of the Awali and Eldar, making them the most powerful psykers in the Federation, but are more vulnerable to anti-psyker weapons. Then there are the Zverians, who are 12 foot tall power armored Space Russians. They impossible to kill, but if one were to wear them out, they'd die due to an overtasked metabolism. The Liulan spam easy to kill troops, but make up for it with lightning fast reproduction. The Anugami are Space Indians (not native), and are difficult to pin down long enough to kill them.

If your Rixari attack one part of the Federation, the rest of the Xai'athi will respond in force, that's what they do. The Awali don't fight alone, they are just one part of an entire species. The others die much the same as humans and Eldar. Also, depending on what part of the Federation you hit, you get a different breed. North=Awali, south=Awali-Zverian, east=Vashti-Eldar-Iconian, west=Anugami, Liulan, Nexusian, Kordanian, and Nokemono. Though how deep did your guys get? I should realyy get around to making a map. -_- Vivaporius 16:27, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, let's see.

Weaknesses


 * The Awali and Iconians, metal bones (Awali) and crystalline bodies (Iconians).


 * The Nokemono as frail as humans, but far faster and agile. Slight psychic potential (just the Priest caste).


 * The Vashti are tougher the humans, lack any metal in their bodies, save for the few nanites, which make little difference in their bodies.


 * The Zvenians were power armor to supplement their vast strength, and made of non-magnetic metals.

As for they resistence to sound, it is in this order from strongest to weakest (top to bottom).


 * Vashti


 * Liulen


 * Nexusian


 * Anugani


 * Nekomono


 * Kordanian


 * Zverian


 * Iconian


 * Awali

Tech


 * The Awali use crystalline and organic weaponry, and fuel their vehicles with a nanite fluid. The Iconians use warbots constructed from home-grown crystals that are quite robust.


 * The Vashti use lots of high-tech fusion in their energy sources, and a mysterious form of electro-magnetic metal that reverses any type of force aganist itself (hit it and get the same force back).
 * The Nokemono and Nexusians use highly advanced psychic tech in the form of old-school weapons, and they ships have an almost ancient look to them (sails, wooden-like build).

I'm still working on the techy details, so that all I have for the time being. I'm still not sure about the depth of the attacks, but I agree with your statement. So what shall we name the conflict? Rixari Incursion, Xai'athi-Rixari Conflict, War of (insert date here), the (insert planet, system, or sector) Campaigns?

Okay, I understand your point. I like Rixari Incursion.And seeing as Binadamu is as wise as he is, and the intel given to him by the Akili before the war, him letting them walk in sounds probable. But "eventually slaugter them"? The smaller breeds of Xai'athi maybe, but I highly doubt any real gains aganist the entire race, they are in fact bloated with 500,000 years of stolen Eldar technology. But don't forget their protectorates, who as a rule, have to provide troops to the Federation during wartime. The Xai'athi would likely send in the xeno troops to die for their "freedoms", while the Xai'athi would step in and finish the enemy off. And let's not forget the tech! :D But really, I understand your point. Vivaporius 00:32, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

The Vashti as a whole would outnumber the Rixari. But how many troops would have invaded the Federation. Vivaporius 01:47, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think Binadamu could play off the Rixari's divisions, and turn them aganist each other? Not the Collective obviously, but perhaps a colony or a fleet? I think that would be a great point to expand on. Vivaporius 02:01, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

The Amara are near damn immortal children of Binadamu and Caria Madora. They are all Alpha grade psykers, due in part to having two Alpha Plus psykers as parents. There are 40 of them, and a few have important positions within the Federation. Most of them however, are inheriently evil, running their own little empires around the galaxy. Some are crime lords, operating massive underground operations, some warlords destroying entire planets for "fun", and some are sadistic scienists, like Asani Madora's Maadui Confederacy, a clone empire which she created as one of her "grand experiments", and flat out pyschopaths like Ghinjo and Ibada Madora, sadistic twins who murder scores of humans, Eldar, and Tau to past the time. The Federation can do nothing about them as Binadamu forbids it. They are also nearly impossible to kill, case in point being Ester Madora, Binadamu's personal assassin and bodyguard. She can continue to fight even without her hear, and trait shared by all of her siblings. Their a massive grey spot in the Federation, even moreso than the Federation's Eldar slave policy. Vivaporius 02:35, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

While I'm in complete agreeance with your idea, Binadamu created the Federation, and watches over it as it is his child. He keeps a close eye on those responsible for leading it for him, and the Akili is responsible for watching all enemy intellegence directed at the Federation. Plus, Binadamu is the most powerful Xai'athi psyker to have lived, have 25,000 years to tone his skills, and is part of a naturally psychic race. Trying to block his mind is suicidial, and attempting to kill his kids would bring the wrath of the entire Federation aganist the Rixari race. Their weapons are indeed powerful, but there are more soldiers in the Iconian military than there are Rixari in the galaxy (as far as I know of). Plus, the Amara, having seen the damage of Rixari weapons on the Xai'athi, being of superior intellegence, and having access to more technology and resources than the Federation is aware of, they developed nanites that were immune to Rixari weaponry. The Vashti have the only weapons capable of killing them, but then there is the whole being able to be resurrected and all. You could probably orcastrate a Rixari covert strike on a Vashti armory, but be aware of the anti-psyker technology the Vashti have. Vivaporius 03:22, July 17, 2011 (UTC)