Board Thread:Critique and Advice/@comment-30488984-20161127034535/@comment-3055683-20161127070449

Hey Doomhammer015,

Thus far, I like what you have on Koein. It is definitely in-depth and fleshes out your Chapter's culture and background nicely. I'd would definitely suggest making a separate article for your Chapter home world so you can add all the fine details in regards to the 'Koein Natives' & 'Notable Creatures' (Flora & Fauna) on the Chapter home world article. On your Chapter article, I would include the 'Koein' & 'Human Culture on Koein' sections. Just my two cents.