Board Thread:Critique and Advice/@comment-28169233-20170103130127

A while ago on this site i made a rather meagre page for a fan chapter, which i have since entirly reformed from the ground up, and plan to redo that page soon. However with all the lore in 40k i'd like to imagine i have atleast an average grasp, however i want to run my ideas past someone who has a good grasp of the lore to critique them. 