User blog comment:WarpSpawn/Over fluffing/@comment-10514705-20120317234708/@comment-4051689-20120318200447

I will admit that I am unleaded into such things as sentence structure and as such lack some of the required moderate skill in order to improve upon or change sentence structure. That said, what would you suggest in the term of the actual structure? I do intend, and more than capable of building upon certain aspects according to religious structure and therefor some of the gods names will be changed to better suit some of the tribal beliefs. Have to say though that I am still building upon the back-story and as such it will be a while before the actual article come to fruition, as it is for certain events to play out I while require certain connections to other articles and characters as to provide mortal allies and enemies both that therefor can better construct a story line.