Talk:Lunar Guard

Just as a general note, proper capitilisation of words is important. It will make things like the information box look better. Now, onto Specilisations:

" Deep defense with precise strikes on enemy lines, shock infantry with tanks, special operations behind enemy lines in groups of scouts, sabotage, fight at a distance, night operations "

^^ That's a lot of specialisations, with a couple not really being specialisations. Take the following examples:

"special operations behind enemy lines in groups of scouts" -- This defines the roles and capabilities of most Chapters' 10th Company.

"shock infantry with tanks" -- I'd either reword this to make it clear exactly how this is a speciality, and/or give a proper explanation in your Chapter description.

They could also be simplified somewhat. For example:

"Deep defense with price strikes on enemy lines" could instead become the two following specialisations:

-- Defensive Fortifications; -- Prescision Artilliary Strikes;

It should be noted that if the Chapter specialises in the use of Shock Infantry, they're highly unlikely to also specialise in defensive strategies or precision long-range strikes. I'm not saying they'd be bad at those things, but Shock Infantry and Defensive Structures don't usually go hand in hand as far as specialiations (at leats in my mind).

Also, try to avoid lots of specialisations. Try to umbrella them. For example, the Chapter I made (the Dark Talons ) specialise in Xenos Extermination. There are many sub-categories of specilisation that fall under that umbrella, such as dealing with hordes, the use of flamer and blast weapons, etc. So for these guys, instead of listing all these relatively specific specialisations, umbrella it under one specialisation such as Tactical Insertion Warfare.

IllumiNini (talk) 00:03, June 16, 2016 (UTC)