Board Thread:Critique and Advice/@comment-30488984-20170719064412

Hey guys, so I am fairly close to finishing up my Praetorian Sons page; still a number of sections that need to be expanded and rewritten, but the core of it is down. I was hoping to receive some feedback from the community before going any further.

I adopted two different writing styles for the  History Section in that the Chapter Creation and Liberation of Ullysarius are written in a lot of detail. Whereas, for the remainder of the history i adopted a more lexicanum approach wherein it was more general information about the period and the chapter with some details regarding major events.

Please let me know which kind of style is perferred!

The reason I decided to change the style was due to the idea that perhaps I can create seperate pages on the major campaigns that the Chapter undertook. So for example, the Liberation of Ullysarius would be one of those campaigns which I would expand on much more.

But should that not make sense, I am all for changing it up to flow better. 