User:IllumiNini/Archive 1

Please read the rules before publishing articles. The Dark Talons have been marked as NCF. They also breach the Quality Policy Rules. Breaking the rules again will result in a temporary suspension.

Yours, --Imposter101 (talk) 08:23, June 8, 2016 (UTC)[

People use the PhotoShop or GIMP programs. --Imposter101 (talk) 08:31, June 9, 2016 (UTC)

http://warhammer40kfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Warhammer_40k_fanon:Canon_Policy#Chaos_Gods

Please read the rules. --Imposter101 (talk) 09:25, June 15, 2016 (UTC)

Removing content from talk pages is probhibited, even if it were about previous article of the same name. I do understand why you did it though as it is a bit unclear what to do with old comments, so you can take this as only a note rather than actual warning. But please do not do it again. -- Remos talk 06:58, June 16, 2016 (UTC)

Iron Warriors
If it's just a vague suggestion, then it's fine, but if it's 'actually' the case, then no, it breaches policy. Really making it a distinct section of the article is what edges towards breaching it, and any sort of mention of possible corrupt gene stock really should be as vague and open ended as possible. But we do not allow under any circumstances Chapters descending from Loyalist members of the Traitor Legions. So no, at the moment, it doesn't breach it. I'd also 'high intelligence' isn't the best evidence they're Iron Warriors.

Yours, --Imposter101 (talk) 11:56, October 24, 2016 (UTC)

Thunder Hawks Artwork
When you go to edit a page there is a dropdown menu. Pick "Rename", follow the instructions and enter in the new name you desire.  Khalael My Talk 06:23, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Minor Ork God
Following policy it really depends how the concept was handled. If you could detail it a bit more, I'd be able to give you better feedback, since I really need to know what you mean by 'God'. --Imposter101 (talk) 15:24, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

In my opinion that sounds relatively fine (though, if the name was canon at some point, I might avoid using it). Other admins might disagree so I'd be cautious but in my opinion that sounds fine. --Imposter101 (talk) 00:42, December 7, 2016 (UTC)

RE: Page creation problem
Not getting the same issue. I'd suggest clearing the cache, etc. Wikia has a lot of issues, so this sort of stuff isn't uncommon. --Imposter101 (talk) 11:56, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Blame Australian internet. — NecrusIV   (Talk)  13:56, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Uh, man. At least that fixed it. I'm no tech wiz, but I'd just blame Wikia. Like I've been here for a while, and I've seen it have hissy fits about the strangest things. — NecrusIV   (Talk)  14:41, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Winged Knights Artwork
Breacher9391 (talk) 00:26, February 9, 2017 (UTC) thank you for your reviews, I will edit most of it as soon as I get back to my laptop.... Guess youbare right. I think Im going a bit too far and I will edit it for more lore friendly. Thanks for the critics and suggestion.

Breacher9391 (talk) 10:42, February 9, 2017 (UTC) hi tony, thanks for the critics. I currently developed and edit my homebrew chapter. I do this in honor of an old friend of mine who died in 2014 while he is on duty. He operates IMI Negev and huge fan of 40k. He also love the design of Centurion Warsuit and in honor of him I decided to play 40k by end of 2016 and buy 3 box of centurion warsuit for my 2nd company Storm Zealot.

I will remove things that isnt important and not lore friendly but for the Centurion Warsuit I decided to keep it as it is. Thanks for all the critics and I will continue to edit it for the next 3 days.

Thank you.

Storm Zealot editing
Breacher9391 (talk) Hi, thanks for the critics and I have made several changes. If there is something needed to be edited let me know.

Breacher9391 (talk) 10:33, February 10, 2017 (UTC)Breacher

Thanks for your comments on my Imperial Lances Chapter. It has given me some ideas and thoughts on how to make it better. Many thanks Zyphis T (talk) 14:16, February 12, 2017 (UTC)Zyhpis T

Hi Ilumi, thanks for all the critics and I already made several changes and try as best as I can to fix any grammatical error. I also hereby give you an authority permission to edit my Storm Zealot if you think it needs to be fixed. I see that my article is getting better thanks to your advice. Please read, edit and gave more advice to me. Thank you Breacher9391 (talk) 07:28, February 28, 2017 (UTC)

Space Marine ages and Millenia year range in 40k Universe
Hi Ilumi, Thanks for all the inputs and critics, right now I currently confused upon the ages of Space Marines, and the Millenia year range in 40k universe. Could you help me regarding the Chapter conflicts and involvements as well as the ages of each notable figures within my Storm Zealot. For the past 3 days Algrim Whitefang had help me upon the proof reading whom I'm not good at. Can you help me regarding the ages ranges as well as adding several ideas for the notable figures and the conflicts and wars?

Can I have a SM character that live up to 2 millenia (M40 to M41) or 3 (M39 to M41)?

Thank you so much for the help.

Breacher9391 (talk) 02:19, March 2, 2017 (UTC)Breacher9391

Crusaders of Retribution Page
Hey I just wanted to say thanks for the feedback on my Crusaders of Retribution page. I also did want to clear a few things up. First my page is still reallty under construction so it is still riddled with errors that I need to fix but you did clear up a few things I really needed to fix. Second I am trying to rewrite a large portion of it to fit the standards here. I mostly had a large portion of this typed on my phone and I moved it here in one big dump so I could start working on it seriously. Third, I would like to take you up on that article writing help and prehaps maybe shoot ideas back and forth if you wouldn't mind? I work better if I have someone to ping ideas off of. I hope you are having a lovely day otherwise!

Crixus Kyner (talk) 03:30, March 2, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Knights
There's nothing specific, largely because we've not really had many Knights or Knight houses before.

Yours, --Imposter101 (talk) 20:21, March 22, 2017 (UTC)

Advices
Hey there, i've seen you on a lot of talk pages about chapters. I'm doing one myself, so could you help me with the writing please ? thank you

Ps : if you have steam or other means to contact you, warn me so that we can work efficiently

Sincerely , Kaedmon (talk) 01:16, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

Help
For the moment, the work is on my google drive. There's multiple ideas (not just a chapter) on which i would like to work on, i had some ideas on them. Unfortunately, i don't know if they are lore friendly or how to write them properly.

I can show you the work though i'd need your mail so that you can have access to it. That's why i wanted another way than talking through talk pages to communicate (like steam for example which allows direct communication).

So let me know when you'll be ready so that i can show, best regards , Kaedmon (talk) 15:00, April 20, 2017 (UTC)

PS : I've added you on steam, --Kaedmon (talk) 10:31, April 21, 2017 (UTC)

Shared the doc
I've sent you an email to confirm that i have shared with you the document on google drive , Kaedmon (talk) 13:50, April 22, 2017 (UTC)

Updated COR
I finally managed to get back to writing and updated the Crusader's page with the Cutting of the Angel's Wings event and the Lost Knowledge event if you want to take a look. I am also adding to Forged in Fire so you can update your section accordingly.

Crixus Kyner (talk) 16:10, April 26, 2017 (UTC)

Sandbox and Drive
Actually, on the drive file it's mostly ideas there and there , nothing concrete i'd say. Just ideas i found and added over time.My sandbox contains only the beginning of the work I made with Algrim a long time ago so it has changed since then.So i'm sorry but it seems you might have to create a new email, because the drive file contains over dozens of pages i can't just transfer in my sandbox.Send me a message on my talk page to tell me that you sent me your new mail through private message. Kaedmon (talk) 15:05, May 3, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Artwork Question
Hey IllumiNini,

To answer your question, much of the artwork created by myself or Achilles Prime, either comes from official sources, or when absent, we utilise what we have found from official sources and made our own templates to create our own Chapter colours schemes. We've created several blank marks of power armour, as well as blank shoulder pauldrons, symbols, various items, attachments and even weapons, all thanks to the wonderful program known as CS6 Adobe Photoshop. Here's a link to some of our stuff. If you need anything else, don't hesitate to ask. Ave Imperator!

Link: Algrim's Space Marine Art Reference

Algrim Whitefang, WH40KFanon Wiki Humble Adept  (talk)  19:05, May 19, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for your time.
Knightwalker591 (talk) 19:49, June 28, 2017 (UTC)

I thank you for your time to work on it, I'm still kinda new and I wanted to make a branching minor faction due to my experimentation with Gold/Sliver Paints with my units. Honestly yes I could do a lot more including a possible name change when I think of a better one. But generally I mean no disrespect to the people of the Fanon and I want to work on it and try to make it a nice faction...

Most of it was off the top of my head based on my knowledge of the lore itself. At any point you wanna crit it, I'm perfectly fine with it and down the road plan on making one better. Plus those were the numbers after a few years the split so, I will try to make some more history to explain that.

I hope you have a nice day and if you want to contact me please do over here or on Discord under "Knightcalibur" or "Knightwalker591".

RE: Word Bearers
The usual tags that apply to a Space Marine chapter (perhaps not founding) would suffice. They wouldn't be 'successors' of the Imperial Heralds, since they were technically still part of the legion.

However, as per wikia rules, all "Loyalist Traitors" are outright banned, so any sort of link must be dubious at best. No specific categories exist (as it's not allowed within the rules). Furthermore, the Horus Heresy novels do make clear all loyalist orientated Word Bearers were cleansed via multiple wide scale purges. The later purges at Calth killed Chaos orientated Word Bearers (who weren't seen as 'reliable') so the idea of a whole Chapter surviving is dubious on it's own (without the rules restrictions). By the time of Calth, no loyalists, at least of no real worth, remained within the Chapter.

Furthermore, the Thousand Sons references are so sparse and so pop history that's it's awkward to try and fall back on them as evidence.

Overall, you'd be best avoiding the whole thing, but if you're dead set on dubious references, keep it as sparse and veiled as possible, as otherwise it'll be tagged and removed. Yours, --Imposter101 (talk) 20:49, July 5, 2017 (UTC)

RE:Talking About Chapters in the Past Tense
It's not a necessity but would probably be the best option - might look weird otherwise. --Imposter101 (talk) 15:28, July 23, 2017 (UTC)

RE: Your answer
Hello Nini,

Since there's been some problem with simultaneous editing of the article, I'd prefer a list. I'll make the necessary changes myself then in order to avoid similar troubles in the future

Greetings, Baca

BacaloV (talk) 09:23, July 27, 2017 (UTC)

Re: Knights Optimum Canon Issues
Thanks for giving me advice, to be honest this chapter is giving me a bit of trouble to write. I'd assumed that the 5th founding was okay for Dark Angels because of the Angels of Solemnity Chapter. I'll change it to the 7th founding. Also is it okay for a DA chapter to leave the Unforgiven? Dragonofelder (talk) 15:49, August 2, 2017 (UTC)

I stored the contents of Tristitian in your sandbox, but it seems there were open html tags messing the page.

With "open" tags, "broken code", or et cetera I mean all elements that look like:

without the closing part of the tag:

Existence of those elements makes checking these articles pretty damn hard. They usually serve no purpose what so ever. One neatly placed &lt;nowiki&gt; tag is good enough to mess the shole page from top to bottom. -- Remos talk 13:54, December 26, 2017 (UTC)

HTML tags have an opening tag which looks like:

and a closing tag:

you can close some tags in themselves, for example break:

is often used like that. However, if you don't close tags at all, they will cause all kinds of funny shit on internet pages, because that is why they were created in the first place. My tip for you is: use source editor when editing Wikia pages. Wikia's wysiwyg editor is complete shitcarbage goodfornothing, even if it is way better than the previous model we used to have. That is the reason we have html policy, maybe you ought to check it out. -- Remos talk 23:09, December 26, 2017 (UTC)

thankn you for pointing out the spelling errors. i was facpalming so hard when reading the message at the simple mistakes you mointed out. Spelling has always been my week point, that and math. I will get right on the changes. Thanks again

ok so i got rid of the whole wealth thing, I think I fixed all the spelling errors, and I made the changes that you informed me of. Hope this meats the credentials. if there is anything else that needs to be changed pleas let me know. Thanks



OK!

ANYTHING ELSE that needs changing or can you finnily remove the damn warning sighn?
 * I compleatly deleted the part about Gillimen and just left in how many Astartes are usually seen at a time.
 * I got rid of the "tracking fleet" part
 * Changed Malennial to Millennium
 * Capitilized every "Chapter"
 * Did some editing to the battle Doctrine
 * Fixed some spelling mistakes I saw below the Doctrine
 * Removed Allies and just put "unknown"
 * Banged my head off the desk a few times
 * Screamed at the top of my lungs
 * And staired long and hard a Clorox bottle of 20min

The American Berserker (talk) 05:26, January 12, 2018 (UTC)Berserker

Sorry for all the Salt
I first want to apologize about my salt as of late. I had just graduated from Tech School and had been job hunting for a wile. So i was under much stress and was snapping at everything. i haven't fully read your reply yet but thank you for putting up with my crap. I took a Hiatus and had what was done in my page proof read by two other people. Sorry again for any inconvenience, and thank you.

The American Berserker (talk) 16:02, January 19, 2018 (UTC)Berserker

Where can i find this Sandbox?
Hey Illum, Sorry again for any inconvenince, where can i find this sandbox you mentioned?

The American Berserker (talk) 16:32, January 19, 2018 (UTC)Berserker

This is amazing! Thank you so much!!!!!
Illum thank you so much for this! It's incredible! this is exatily what i was trying to do! I cant thank you enough for this amazing work you did for me!

The American Berserker (talk) 02:36, January 20, 2018 (UTC)Berserker

Is my page meating all the requierments?
Hey bud, how you doing? Just wondering if my chapter met the requierments. Thanks a bunch for the sandbox BTW. Im deffinatly going to add more content but im just wondering if the warning can be removed now. Thanks

The American Berserker (talk) 04:02, January 21, 2018 (UTC)Berserker

Alright thanks man

The American Berserker (talk) 17:26, January 21, 2018 (UTC)Berserker

ummmm... most of that is the sandbox you gave me. Sorry but any spelling mistake on the page was made by you dude.

The American Berserker (talk) 21:17, January 23, 2018 (UTC)Berserker

Hey Illum. if its not to much trouble, would you be so kind as to correct the things i clearly dont see. Im just asking if you would be generous enough to do it, thanks.

The American Berserker (talk) 00:24, January 24, 2018 (UTC)Berserker

cause you mentioned proof reading. also Fang did the info box and he is much better at it then me. What is an "unofficial entry?" I'm really new hear and have a job now so i rally can sit down and read every single rule that you enforcing

Regarding my chapter
Hey,

So I seen what you posted and I repect you for reaching out to help my project.So I have changed around some of the lore to make it more lore friendly.I give you permision to change some of the formats or change some of the terminology around.Though do not change any of the lore or delete any sections with out telling me. Also I am not too good with Gene-seed lore. So if you could give me some suggestions on what to add for lore behind it be my guest.

Good evening Brother IllumiNini if you could could you proof read the information on my Capter page Emperor"s Deliverance  and Thank you for the support.

Chapter Master Friedrich (talk) 21:41, February 4, 2018 (UTC)Chapter Master Friedrich

Chapter Overview
Good evening Brother IllumiNini thank you for your assistance with my chapter Emperor's Deliverance. I have added some new stuff and i was hoping you can give my work so far an overview.

Chapter Master Friedrich (talk) 21:48, February 4, 2018 (UTC)Chapter Master Friedrich

Deletion
Hey there, I've started working on deleting your articles. Good luck in any future endeavours. --Imposter101 (talk) 09:22, April 8, 2018 (UTC)