Talk:Ronin

ok while the premise for this chapter is good and easily workable and decently delivered, with particular note the level of mystery and lack of flat out statement. This is still in that respect a lot better than some of the stuff some vets here try to pull.

that said,there are some MAJOR material problems with this chapter 1st 7 grand cruisers, and 8 battleships.....*sigh*.... that's more than most large imperial fleets possess, at most a chapter of SM get is 3 batlebarges, and battlebarges are still considered smaller than battleships (if just as expensive and powerful) you just placed a Sector fleet in the hands of a group of Space Marines, ones which i might point out, you have on very bad terms with the mechanicum, aka the guys who build ALL Battleships and Grand Cruisers.

Next in the materials issue is the number of baneblades and similarly classed vehicles.... 100 land raiders is the same as replacing rhinos with land raiders, Baneblades are not meant for SM and generally you're placing material forces meant for a Crusade level force in the hands of a single chapter, in lore there is a major reason to not do that. Said Reason is called the Horus Heresy, followed by the Badab war, followed by every other time a SM got too big for his britches.

and about the titan, the admech own pretty much every titan the Imperium has, and any rumor of someone owning one without exception involves Skitarii with knights, battle servitors and a Emperor class knocking on said people's door...hell they destroyed entire chapters for trinkets that add a nice power glow effect on the power weapon. see Soul Drinkers chapter as well, while Admech and SM don't get along the SM usually have to struggle to maintain the secrecy of minor engine upgrades and their low Armour APCs...not city destroying super weapons. then not to mention Skitarii Codex and Cult Mechanicum Codex both insist that admech always are recording and never delete data, and use the noon-sphere network as opposed to astropaths due to it's superior reliability.

but just to reinforce, outside the material issues, the chapter themselves are very well designed. Allow me a demonstration. This is your body...WITHOUT FIBER! (talk) 04:59, June 19, 2015 (UTC)