User blog comment:SniperGhost/Codex/@comment-3046369-20100906200907/@comment-1223903-20100906221304

You've got a good start with your chapter, but I'd like to see it fleshed out more before it goes in. Take a look at some of the other well developed chapters like the Golden Legion, Iron Tigers, Heralds of Coming Doom, etc to get an idea about what we're looking for in terms of how developed. I look forward to reading your article! If you need any help just give me a message on my talk page.