Talk:King-Goy

Okay. I have a few notes on this. First off they feel a bit overpowered. These guys supposedly can go toe to toe with Astartes, who for that matter are elite super-soldiers. The idea that three of these "Agents" can take down a Deathwatch Kill-Team is way over the top.Also the fact that their basic ships are the equivalent of Battle barges is seriously overkill. I suggest you tone their abilities down a bit. Another thing I would like to address is the idea of this "Federation". Now the idea is not completely undoable, but regardless of their origins these guys should not be a match for the Imperium on qa one to one basis. I can't stress that enough. Also, correct me if I am wrong, but I get the feeling that the Federation is at least partly inspired off of the Covenant from Halo, and the King-Goy off of the Sangheili. Now drawing inspiration from a beloved piece of fiction is not wrong, but one must be careful about how one employs it. I am your master! At your service. (talk) 22:42, April 23, 2013 (UTC)