Board Thread:Critique and Advice/@comment-5940646-20161026204618/@comment-3055683-20161027215128

So from my understanding, the Space Hornets home world is currently occupied by hundreds of thousands, if not millions of orks. Yet, both humans and the Space Hornets primarily live in orbit amongst a Dark Age of Technology mining port. That's good. You could definitely expand upon this. Often a Chapter is stamped by their birthworld, or in this case, where they reside in the void of space. Where a Chapter comes from often stamps itself upon both their character and culture - mannerisms, speech, physical marks of allegiance and even idiosyncrasies of warfare, all might be touched by their Chapter's common ancestry.

You could imply that since the lost of their homeworld many millennia earlier, that the surviving humans who reside in Forlorn Heaven are schooled and blooded in the brutal arts of void warfare from childhood to adulthood. These voidborn humans would be trained in this dangerous form of warfare in order to eke out a meagre existence amongst the asteroids, vying for territory and resources, and occasionally setting aside their differences to face a common enemy, such as encroaching xenos or a Chaos warband. This would enable them to scavenge weapons from enemy vessels over thousands of years.

Explain that life in such a hostile environment has resulted in a population of humans who are both disciplined and brutal, as killing and war has become a necessity. Maybe mention that when fighting a blood feud or dispute over territory that over time, they have developed a strict code of conduct which defines the boundaries of bloodshed as dictated by tradition and enforced by custom. This has resulted in an excellent pool of potential Neophytes, whose reputation for excellence in void combat, shock assault, ship-borne assaults and boarding actions, is without peer.

Just some ideas...