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Spectral Wolves Specialist Unit
Hi Algrim, my friend had replied and he is happy with your ideas with some renaming upon the units. We have ideas about adding a unit similar to the wulfen but different backgrounds its called Spectral Berserkers, a space marine unit specialist for their killing frenzy thanks to their survival of slaying tyranids as well as eating their meat that cause them to go berserk but still retain their sanity after. There will be new artworks for the chapter badge and I will reply it to you later. Thanks alot

Breacher9391 (talk) 02:48, April 12, 2017 (UTC)

Spectral Wolves 2
Hi Algrim, thanks for your writings and ideas.

I have discussion with my friends and he decided to create 6 companies, the last one will be for the berserker company and the nuber will be 600

Here is the picture of each company + the new chapter badge, I do need your help in modify the space marine chapter image and the chapter badges based on the new badge.

Thank you so much here is the  chapter badge

New Chapter Thousand Blades, Might Require Proof Reading
Hi Algrim, thanks again for your artwork, your amazing design, and your additional viking themed glossary to the Spectral Wolves.

I have made new Chapter, Thousand Blades, It might require your help in proof reading as well as new images and chapter badges.

The Chapter Badges is Hussar Helmet, without the wings and Blades surroounding the helmet.

You could edit, add additional infos, creating excellent quotes, stories, campaigns, etc to the Thousand Blades Space Marine. Thank you so much

Breacher9391 (talk) 02:41, April 13, 2017 (UTC)

Hey Algrim, me again. I have two requests this time. 1. Would it be possible for you to remake Azriel based upon the wargear in his character page? I know you already made him, and it looks great, I just didnt give a whole lot of thought into his wargear before I asked. 2. Could you design a chapter badge for the Solar Wardens? If so, thanks!

Also, thanks for editing my pages. I keep missing things or don't have time to fix them, and it was nice of you to go through and fix them. THank you so much

TireKhorne (talk) 23:19, April 13, 2017 (UTC)TireKhorne

CG artwork
Thanks for the artwork, it looks very whovian! Dragonofelder 15:26, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Thousand Blades
Hi Algrim, its Breacher again, your artwork is amazing and I love the Winged Hussar Space Marine. Thanks alot for your help.

As for the chapter Badge, Im gonna look for new ones and there might be changes. Stay in touch.Breacher9391 (talk) 16:06, April 14, 2017 (UTC)

Crimson Scorpions
Hey, thank you for going over and making the chapter seem more interesting with your skill of words but a few problems. Now before you read this please remember this is criticism and me being defensive over how my chapter is formed as I want them to really stand out instead of just a basic "oh look I'm a son of the angel" type of deal. I love the work and all the help you supply this community and myself and I hope you keep doing so. But if you are going to make changes in my Crimson Scorpions at least run it past me first so I don't go to add on it and go "why are there scouts here" or "Why are there scouts when they become full battle brothers? LOGAR!!!" ya know? Anyways thanks for the help but I'm going to leave what I like you doing and what I don't like you doing to them so far. Starting with the negative.

Things I don't like -

1. The chapter doesn't use scout marines as you have put in the chapter organization as they are very divergent from the codex. They view it almost damningly only agreeing with the thousand cap for each chapter although at times viewing this as a damnation as well as it has lead to the entire death of a chapter. Yes, it can help contain the black rage but that is why each siege force has 250 marines in it as they can quickly react to any brothers fallen to the black rage and mark it off as a casualty of a siege or void battle.

2. They don't use company really they are known as a siege force (siege force 1-4) as each one holds 250 marines ready to break down the walls of any Xenos or damned traitors.

3. The siege forces 2-4 are NOT reserves and serve just as actively in the battles of mankind as the 1st siege company. However, one company will usually be stationed at their homeworld resupplying and picking up new members as the other siege forces are fighting in the emperor's name. The first siege force does have more veterans than other siege forces but they make sure that the veterans are spread out evenly so that each siege force can host elite warriors.

4. SCOUT MARINES!!! sorry to bring this up again but in the recruitment process I made it strictly say that they are made full battle brothers after they are ascended to angels of death. There is no learning period of being a scout. They are put into one of the ranks of marines such as wall breakers, trench cleanser, siege breakers, and so on. However, they run siege simulations and training regularly so they have an idea of what to expect and how to perform.

5. The Wall Breakers use siege shields and combat this, however, is mostly my fault when I was writing so not gonna blame you for that one in any regard but eh still going to include in here.

Things I like/love-

1. Your writing style. The way you write it makes it seem like someone has actually gone into the records of the chapter and is being read to by a servo skull or something. You make the writings flow really well with a rare moment of confusion. Even then it's easily overlooked as the next sentence brings the world to life.

2. Your independence of editing. Although this is double sided in my mind due to the scout reasons above. If you are helping someone make their space marine chapter come to life you will go in and edit the writings so it's easier and much more exciting to read. Plus my English not being the best I love it even more as it feels like I'm being mentored in a way. Although most of my writings were changed in the creation of the Crimson Scorpions I try my best to replicate the excitement and the flow you use to write chapters.

3. The artwork. Oh, my emperor, the artwork you make is simply stunning to me. It may not seem like much to you but it blows me away as I don't know how to do stuff like that. Making Mk 5 "heresy" pattern armored marines and other things like that I have no idea on how to do things like that. Yet you can make it reflect the chapter perfectly. I love that you are willing to make these little artworks for other people if they ask for help and that you look into their chapter and how to best reflect them in that artwork.

4. Your editing. I know I kind of said it in number 2 but it's true. You know how to work the format of this wiki and make things fall into place or reorganize things in a space marine chapter so it flows better. I find it to be pretty awesome you can do stuff like that.

Again to say again this is not an attack on you this is just my opinions on what you have done when helping me with the Crimson Scorpions chapter. I would like to still have your help but perhaps run things by me first to see if it fits in my vision for the chapter before making them. If it's making a story flow better then go ahead freely. Things that are already established like chapter recruitment and you just touch it up so the wording is better is also okay. But making it so scout marines are in there even though after the trails and augmentation they become full battle brothers is heresy. Keep up the great work and edit for the emperor! (or chaos depending on what you working on). JordanAngel (talk) 08:04, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Talk a bit
Hey Algrim, can we talk a bit on the enjin forums ? just to get some news since last time. Kaedmon (talk) 09:56, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for editing both Spectral Wolves, and Thousand Blades
Hey Algrim, you did great and I would like to thank you for all your help and support across all my pages from Storm Zealots, to the Thousand Blades. The Bike squad artowrok is amazing it look like Winged Hussar of the 41st millenium

More Crimson Scorpion.
Hey, it's Jordan again. I read what you left on my profile and took it under consideration. I'm leaving the idea of the other siege forces being a reserve because it does make sense. They are a siege chapter basically so why wouldn't they have reinforcements. Also on the topic of scout marines. There are no scouts. No one running around with sniper rifles in little chest plates. The scouting is usually left to the Reaper Talons as they can move around quickly and are a terror unit. So on the subject of scouting and such, it falls to the Reaper Talons. Thank you for expanding on why you put the things as you did allow me to fully see what you were meaning by it. Keep up the good work. Oh, also can you make the current chapter master? Like the artwork so people can see the Forge Father. Hes basicly an augmented terminator with a special thunder hammer and a thunder shield that has spikes. Thank you for helping the community. JordanAngel  ( talk ) 18:04, April 15, 2017 (UTC)

Urthan's Chapters
Hello Algrim. First thing first, I want to thanks you again for your awesome works on all the Chapters I've created (I've noticed the constant improvement you've made to the depiction of the Marines, you really are incredible !).

I don't want to abuse your kindness, but would you know how to design symbols for Brotherhoods and Companies ? I would like to add to the Void Ravens, Ashen Drakes and Marauding Eagles a board (I'm not sure that it's the correct term in English) for their Holds/Companies/Brotherhoods (I hope that I'll be able to find how to add one of those boards myself, but designing the symbols will be harder).

Also, If you can find some time, a banner for the Eagles or the Drakes would be awesome !

In any case, thanks you a lot once more !

Urthan (talk) 19:31, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Talk about the "project"
Hey Algrim, when you've got time , leave me a message on my talk page (not on the enjin forums anymore). We need to talk about the project itself.Kaedmon (talk) 22:56, April 17, 2017 (UTC)

Chapter SM
Hey algrim, can i ask you a favor ? i would like you to make a version of the mad nomads of these sm (which i think its amazing so i thank the authors, Breacher and Urthan for giving me the idea). The idea for the power claymore came from the tempest blades which will be a gear added to the chapter.

Also, a blackshield with on the heraldic shield numbers instead of just pure darkness on it.

For the one with the fur, i would like a version where he's wearing a mark 8 armor and a white centurion helmet from the pre heresy armor and without the sword on his back ,thank you in advance ,  Kaedmon (talk) 00:48, April 20, 2017 (UTC)



Art Request for Storm Zealots
Hi Algrim its Breacher again, if you aint busy, could you do me a favor? I saw a great pics of the Thousand Blades and Silverbacks. Could you make one for me as well Maybe a team of devastators or tactical ones? Thank you so much Algrim.