Talk:Novus Krakens

Might want to read the rules, my friend. I've seen you make several edits to this page already and it seems that you still haven't read the rules. For example, you have failed to meet the minimum article length in spite of the fact that you have made several edits to the page. That may have to be your first stop before making any new pages or any further edits to existing pages.

As for the content of the page itself (limited though it currently is), I have a few thoughts. One of the first things I noticed was that what you've written for the "Colours" entry of the page's infobox is unecessarily long. All you have to do is list the colours and and images you upload and link to this page will tell us the rest. If you feel the need to write a paragraph to go in-depth about the colour scheme, making it a section at the bottom of the page is a better option.

The second thing I noticed is that the two paragraphs that you have written seem to be a cluster of unexplored ideas that have been unnecessarily mashed into two paragraphs. I suggest that, upon you next edit of this page, you put each of these ideas under an appropriate heading and try to flesh them out.

The final thing is to make the quote you've placed at the top of your article relevant. There's not a lot of point having a cool-sounding quote if it holds no meaning in the context of the article.

Best of luck with your writing! :) IllumiNini (talk) 05:42, January 30, 2017 (UTC)