Talk:Kakarot

"Kakarot is the current Chapter Master of the Saiyan Knights . He took the mantle of the Chapter Master after previous Chapter Master Frieza who was slain in battle". Just looking at that makes my brain fizzle. But outside of that on a more serious note, you need to work on your writing skills, they're very basic. You just tell everything in a mechanical and bare-bones way. You should try to at least be a little more anecdotal, i.e. showing, not telling. — NecrusIV   (Talk)  14:44, January 20, 2015 (UTC)