Talk:Medici "St. Phygia Regiment"

Alright, no offense. But this page needs a lot of work. Firstly it is difficult to read, not formatted very well, and doesn't do much to explain your regiments history and culture, other than they were founded and died fighting nids. Why they were founded, what kind of combat tactics they use, something I noticed in your Youngbloods as well. Secondly your officers, they don't wear armor? That seems foolish for an Infantry regiment, officers usually get better armor, light carapace sometimes.

Moving on to their Equipment, I strongly suggest you put more detail into their equipment, why they have it, what pattern it is, since there are a Million types of lasguns and each one is different, and "All other Equipment" is far to broad, what does that include, besides the basics like a copy of the Uplifting Primer and their Meal Kit, do they carry demolitions gear, extra ammo, medical supplies.

Their structure, again put more detail into it. Better tell how their squads are formed and function, instead of just saying 6-7 Assualt with Lascannons, do they use Man Portable Lascannons and act in a more Mobile fashion, or do they Roll out the Heavier Version on a Gun Carrage and fight more statically.

The Notable Members of this Unit as well are needing of work, The Colonel for example, not being a noble, but becoming a Captain immediatly, and replacing the Colonel who just Retired, Firstly one doesn't simply retire from the Guard, Either you Die, or are too badly injured to continue service. This goes for Regiments as well, if a Regiment is too broken to continue, they either merge with another or are given leave to return home or given another world to Settle. Secondly you didn't really give us much info on him, what I got about him is that he is a Drunk womanizer who uses his Money to get ahead, rather than his own skill.

Finally, Dianora. I don't get her story at all. She is a Whore if I am correct, Sold into service of a Noble to pay a family dept, but the colonel who visits her often decided to buy her from the Noble to replace a fallen trainee, that is very suspicious, either the colonel had other plans for her, or it is just not though out well. Why not simply get a new recruit without paying a fortune to a noble.

Blackdamp (talk) 17:05, October 10, 2014 (UTC)