Talk:Emperor's Deliverance

I do like the concept, and it's always nice to see more Sons of Dorn come into the fold. There are just a few things that need your attention: Other than that, I'd just proof-read. There are places where you should be capitalising words such as 'Space Marine(s)', 'Chapter' when referring to a Space Marine Chapter, etc. There are a few cases where you should probably use words for ease of reading such as "...deployed a thousand Sons of Dorn..." as oppsed to "...deployed 1000 sons of Dorn...", but this is up to you, of course.
 * Quotes (like the one at the top of the page) need to go in a Quote Template.
 * When you write out headers such as "Chapter History", you don't need to underline the text or put the colon there. The automatic formatting of headers makes such things redundant.

And one final thing - More paragraphs is better than one big paragraph (aka wall of text haha). May be a good idea to separate such things out into smaller paragraphs.

I look forward to reading more. Best of luck, IllumiNini (talk) 10:20, February 4, 2018 (UTC)