Talk:Grail of the Imperium

So there are issues with your page: So you do have a bit to work on before that Quality Control tag is removed. Best of luck, IllumiNini (talk) 01:24, January 10, 2018 (UTC)
 * There's stray HTML Code.
 * You have repeats of your Construction and Property Templates.
 * When filling in the Property Template, you only need to fill in your username.
 * You don't have to fill in the blank with "owned by the American Berserker" since the Property Template is a statement of "Ownership" anyway.
 * Your Chapter is not allowed to be part of the Horus Heresy. Your Chapter must be created as part of a Founding which must be the 3rd Founding or later. I suggest looking at the Wiki's Policies regarding this.
 * It's spelt "Blood Ravens", not "Blood Ravins".
 * There is no point saying "(working on it)" in the Battle cry section of the infobox. If you haven't got a battle cry for your Chapter, simply leave the entry blank until you do.
 * There are a number of spelling and gramatical errors that need to be fixed. Examples include:
 * A lack of capital letters where there should be in a number of places.
 * Things like "ship to ship" should be "ship-to-ship" instead.
 * It should be "run down" not "rundown". They're two different things.
 * Spelling errors such as "vesicle". I think you meant "vehicle" since you're undoubtedly refering to vehicles and not a small fluid-filled bladder, sac, cyst, or vacuole within the body.
 * Use of "exon". What is that?
 * Then there's canon and general content issues. For example:
 * Why would a Chapter need wealth let along need to use said wealth to buy their equipment? I have never seen anything anywhere to suggest that Space Marine Chapters need to buy their equipment or obtain wealth for any other purchases of any sort.
 * Why would Space Marines be making random attacks?
 * To say that "Attacks are rarely executed at random and are almost always planned out ahead of time." seems to falsely suggest that Space Marines making random attacks is commonplace.