User blog comment:WhiteSeraph/Alternate Timeline Idea That I'm Really Psyched About/@comment-4051689-20110926161517

I'm not sure... I may be a chaos loving heretic but even i must admit that Gullimans death was a little bit anti-climatic and the ultramarines (i meant smerf-marines) planet-wide demise a little to quick. I mean, sure, kill gulliman and his smerf-marines but put in some build up! where's the anquish? the sorrow? where are the scenes of brother primarchs collapsing in grief? where is that single golden tear descending from the emperors immortal eyes? where is the struggle of the smerf-marines and there attempts to hold back this impossable foe? where is Gullimans final moments, of which he throws himself at the enemy? where is the hope that gulliman might be alive? and if so, where? where is....oh..your not that far into it and this is only a sample? sorry....