Talk:Grey Sentinels

Hello there and welcome! Well for a first article this is pretty good :) Creating a chapter to hold a strategic sector from the tau, nice. Only a few things to point out, nothing severe.
 * 1) Now alliances out out nessecity arent bad. However they hate the tau, and yet the Tau say their compatable to their ideaology? Doesnt really make sense.
 * 2) Whats with the bold writing? Are you trying to make links?
 * 3) The remains of a chapter arent absorbed into another, i dont think. If their on the verge of extinction then i dont know what happens. Either they persist and recover, or die out.
 * 4) They cant have a new implant. The implants were created by the Emperor himself, a genius, among, genius, who are all among geniuses. You cant just make a new one.

Anywho, thats what i have for now. But dont be bummed out. Your article looks good so far. I can also help with the templates if you want.

Regards -DirgeOfCerberus111 (talk) 23:38, August 9, 2012 (UTC)