Board Thread:Discussions/@comment-32600226-20180821015553/@comment-25684606-20180822144046

I like it so far and have 2 suggestions to make

First: Perhaps add a short paragraph about them destroying some of the Akhet Dynasty's worlds after they went to the Long Sleep. The current plan accounts for only 3 remaining Tomb Worlds and I think it would make sense that it has been the Eldar who destroyed much of the rest of the Dynasty.

Second: Perhaps change the name of the Craftworld. This is probably very subjective, but 'Loucetius' does not sound like an Eldar name to me.