Talk:Mercatura Confederacy

There are a few issues with the article. The first is that all Exodite worlds were colonized in the far, far galactic east at the edge of Ultima Segmentum. Second, your was founded at the heart of the Eldar Empire at it's height, and any empire near their territory would have been destroyed by them. Finally, if your empier was founded in M15, then by the time the Fall of the Eldar occurred, any psykers in your species would have been killed by the creation of the Eye of Terror. If not, then they would have been wiped out during the Great Crusade. For starters, I would move them to the Eastern Fringe or the galactic northwest. Second, I would explain how they survived the Great Crusade. Finally, since they merged with the Eldar, I would explain why the Eldar didn't just kill the human colonists. Other than that, your dping a good job. Vivaporius 03:02, October 5, 2011 (UTC)