Board Thread:Critique and Advice/@comment-30488984-20170719064412/@comment-30488984-20170720003605

Thank you for the feedback, but please do not talk to me as though I am a child.

According to the Timeline of 40k the Nova Terra Interregnum was from the mid M34 - late M35.

I also knew about the rule about no 2nd founding Chapters, but I wanted something akin to the Dark Angels Fallen being thrown through the Warp and appearing in different points in time and location. With the sorcery of the Word Bearers i thought it would be appropriate to have a mishap like that occur.

They also appeared during the time of the Fifth Founding, which I realize I didn't actually outright state but I figured that saying "in the waning years of the 32nd Millennium" would have been enough. Seeing that they are of Ultramarine gene-stock and formed the Chapter during the Third Founding, all be it an unconventional founding for a Chapter, I do not see what is exactly wrong with it. There is also no set date for the 5th founding and according to the Lexicanum, it was sometime in the late 32nd Millennium.

I will go back and change the Sons of Guilliman wordings, its just that in the Horus Heresy novels, many of the Legions are referred to as "The sons of _____" be it Dorn, Lorgar, Angron, and so on. I also didn't know of the Sons of Guilliman Chapter even existing and after reading the Lexicanum page, I'm not surprised due to their lack of lore.

Regarding the Forge world(s), not all the worlds where the Chapter had fiefs were under the Chapter's authority, "rebuilding and advancing the various planets that were run by the Chapter as fiefs and the other planets within those systems as well". They do not have forges or recruit from those planets, but "were able to form an agreement with a forge world" meaning that they made a Pact with them. They erected forges and recruited from fiefs, not the forgeworld.

I'll remove the Dark Imperium bit.