Talk:Death Scythes

Regardless of whether or not it's required, it's nice to see an information box pertaining to the article. For most articles (particularly Space Marine Chapter Articles since they're the articles I read the most), it definitely helps to have an information box as it helps me guage what sort of Chapter I'm reading about. For example, an info box will very quickly tell me that your Chapter either doesn't know their genetic lineage or knows which lineage they come from, which immediately tells me the 'flavour' of the Chapter. I also noticed that you have a lot of one-sentence paragraphs. I don't know wherther or noy this is because you're just putting down your ideas before you forget them, but I'd definitely recommend expanding on these points or folding them into other paragraphs.

I honestly haven't read the content apart from skimming across a few of the sentences, but I promise I will read them once the ideas are a bit more flesh out. Best of luck, IllumiNini (talk) 11:26, March 21, 2017 (UTC)