Talk:Derkallen

I like the Derkallen. Very original idea for a race of 40k aliens. More Xenos scum that must be purged the better. :).Cal XD 19:43, October 13, 2010 (UTC)

I am glad that you like them so far. I am working hard for this to be a proper new faction. Trust me, what you have read is just the beggining. The Derkallen have quite a few interesting attributes that are gonna make them something special. Supahbadmarine 19:57, October 13, 2010 (UTC)

Great idea very original. Seem's like more compitation or customors hahahaahahahhahahhaha! Imposter101 20:34, October 19, 2010 (UTC)

Glad you like my idea. There is more to come. Supahbadmarine 02:18, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Editing
I'm really liking these guys. The concept of the Palash is brilliant.&nbsp I was also wondering, given how amazing the article is, whether or not I could correct all of the spelling, punctuation and grammar mistakes in order to enhance the article. A Shadow Before the Dawn 15:52, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

If it is just that then feel free. Grammar has sometimes been a weak point of mine. Supahbadmarine 16:08, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the permission Supahbadmarine. A Shadow Before the Dawn 16:44, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

No thank you. You cleaning up the article will improve it greatly and I think this article might become my crowning achievement on this site. Supahbadmarine 16:56, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

I've mostly done it, so I may need to check it again (since it usually takes me 2-3 times of editing a passage before I get all of them :) ). A Shadow Before the Dawn 18:40, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. The help with this article is appreciated. Supahbadmarine 18:45, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

Your most welcome, I'm more than happy to help on a well thought out article. A Shadow Before the Dawn 19:06, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

I can tidy up your latest contribution if you like. A Shadow Before the Dawn 21:14, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, feel free and thank you for your help. Supahbadmarine 21:32, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

I've tidied up the Breeds. I'll edit the Palash section and the Society sections at a later date.