Talk:Oathswords

ok good job with the page thus far. a very believable chapter.

might I suggest looking to collab with another member of the site to come up with some more original battle ideas. i know User:40kfan would most likely be a good person to speak with in that regard. I'm certain he has a SM page that would work well alongside your chapter, and then plenty of people here have a potential enemy for them to do battle against.

However one nitpick it says they fought along side the Grey Knights. No real problem there, your even writing this more as a info containing wiki page than a story page, but it's GK standard proceedure to mind-wipe or kill anyone who has fought alongside them as they are sort of like the secret army of the Ordo Malious. Allow me a demonstration. This is your body...WITHOUT FIBER! (talk) 04:21, December 3, 2014 (UTC)