Board Thread:Critique and Advice/@comment-30488984-20170719064412/@comment-30488984-20170720181320

No worries, I totally understand. Plus since I am a fairly new user it makes sense to make that assumption and I guess in regards to the comparason with other users, I'm young compared to most.

Yeah, about the warp stuff, I know its a bit of a strech but I figured its possible with the warp's weird "properties"/capabilities. I just have a huge fascination with the Legions, I'm just finishing up the Know No Fear of the Horus Heresy Series and I just wanted a Chapter that could be of that proud lineage. If my fluff explanation still doesn't convince yourself or the other admins, I can find a way to change it and cut out the Great Crusade/Great Scouring bit.

I see I messed up with the info-box, I am also working on my other Chapter: Teuton Brotherhood (which requires extensive rewriting), so I think I mixed up the foundings. Its supposed to say 5th, which I thought from the Lex that it was unknown but at least guessed to be late in the 32nd. I mean, I can easily change the date, its not like anything significant happen that early on in the Chapter history anyway.

Totally understood regarding the Ultramarines, I'll try to refrain from it. I just really like the ring to it haha.

Thank you for the input, I'll get to fixing up the article and researching a little further. I tend to be a knit-picker on details and get a little carried away with description and such. Most of the problem I have is that I research too much and read conflicting lore/out of date lore and I end up writing with it. Such as the Black Templars apparently not having 6,000+ marines for an example.