Talk:Reliunium Greatguard

Cool article: I like your style.

I think it could be made better if you explained why the world is constantly at war.

Under the 'Imperial Service' heading, I think it would read better something like this: 'In addition to their service in the Imperial Guard, the Greatguard are often hired by planetary governors to protect important locations in high-risk areas. As they are grown up with war, it is more natural for them to face hordes of enemy soldiers than to look at the holovision.'

I fixed the info template; you should be able to go ahead and write in it whatever you want, I also fixed a few typos.Jochannon 09:32, December 11, 2010 (UTC)