Talk:Keepers of the Flame

Hello there and welcome to the wiki! Now, your new here so i need to point out a few things. This site has had to enforce a more strict quality control recently in order to keep a consistent level of quality. The problems are nothing major but they have an effect on your article. A few things i must bring to your attention. Other details can be brought up later but this are most prominant (besides #4). Now if you be discouraged, dont, first article usually have problems and you've avoided the most irritating and common of them. Actually the issue here is actually a little original. :P But i digress, there is not shortage a people here willing to help out including I. If you have any questions feel free to ask anyone.
 * 1) First and foremost these guys have traveled to the 43rd Millenium even though canon history ends at the dawn of the 42nd. Now i can see what your doing here but this is unsteady ground. We do have Extended Timelines for these, however you should only make one if you have extensive experiance as they are large and detailed undertakings.
 * 2) You mentioned the Blaze Ravens. That is a fanon chapter made by me. I dont know if you were aware but if so, you need permission to use another writer's article.
 * 3) Whats with all these auxiliaries and baneblades? I will say simply because there is too much history to go over, but a Chapter would not have these at all. Perhaps a small mortal auxilia, but not like this.
 * 4) Most badass marine ever? Really? Isn't that a bit silly, to descripe a warrior monk as such let alone use it as a serious topic?

Regards -DirgeOfCerberus111 (talk) 01:52, March 15, 2013 (UTC)